Saturday, December 24, 2011

Short Poem

Lie lie,

Let me lie in my place.

Breathe breathe,

I need to remember I'm still living.

Motion, motion

I want time to stop in place.

Forever, forever,

A ever lasting peace.


7 comments:

  1. We can't forget we're living, indeed.

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  2. But we at some points forget that we r living. Like in dreams, we are uncertain whats real and not real at times.

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  3. And would bacteria even think so.

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  4. I have a feeling you know that answer so why ask? Well I'll answer it anyway, no. My reasoning is that bacteria don't think but they can if they could. In reality, I'm not sure ><

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  5. That wasn't really a question, for there was no question mark. Although since it was in that format, it could have been.

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  6. It's all beautifo. Heh concepts... concepts... I am going insane.

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  7. Thank you and oh sorry for taking it wrong. Ah well, at least you enjoyed it.

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